Check out this commercial with a hook, claim and reasons!
Edit: spelling, punctuation and grammar!
Revise: goal is to improve the quality of your ideas!
Re = again Vision = to see
Revision = to see again
*You will be adding, subtracting, moving, and changing things!
Questions to consider:
Re = again Vision = to see
Revision = to see again
*You will be adding, subtracting, moving, and changing things!
Questions to consider:
- Do I have a clear claim?
- Do I have clear reasons with relevant supporting details?
- Have I identified a counterclaim and provided a rebuttal?
- Does everything make sense?
- Have I done everything possible to express myself well?
- Have I chosen the best words?
- Do I have well-crafted sentences?